Telling everyone about your secret that bad but player system allowed Gojo a non player to enter a dungeon of player that is one of the biggest system hole I've ever seen. This system has zero security. I won't be surprised if it get stolen. MC is an idiot. Novel is not good. Infact with telling his every secrets novel did manage to subvert expectation (O' how I loathe this term) in negative way. Usual thing happens when writer use it. By spelling his guts only it only mages to make reader break immersion. Writers a piece of advice when MC have secret something otherworldly relative to the verse, that secret is bond between reader and MC, it's like monogamous relationship so other then MC and reader no one is welcomed. Another thing, what is with your system's gold number is it missing a zero at the end or just didn't bother.
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giốngAlright another thing noted down, never reveal such secrets, and as for his stupidity I just the average iq of a high school student and based the Mc of them, plus when he saw everyone techniques dam, they can bend space and time and this guy can summon Shinigami along with mmanipulating shadows, a curse technique that make me a video game character shouldn’t be a big deal