Maybe to early for a review but I like it so far. Call me bias but this Author make a good start to his/her fanfic. I don't see any grammar issues at all (for me at least) and I enjoy it. Hoping that this fanfic will get much love from everyone because I can see the potential of it. Also hope that Author will make it to the end.P/s: There so much girls in there that I want them all!
OlwinMoriarty
Được 10 người thích
giốngThank yu so much for the review! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story so far.It means a lot to me to get feedback from readers. It motivates me to keep improving my writing. I have a lot of ideas swirling around in my head for the next chapters. I'm very excited to keep developing this story to the end.Thanks again for taking the time to leave the review. Support from readers like you is what inspires me to try my best :3
OlwinMoriarty:Thank yu so much for the review! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story so far.It means a lot to me to get feedback from readers. It motivates me to keep improving my writing. I have a lot of ideas swirling around in my head for the next chapters. I'm very excited to keep developing this story to the end.Thanks again for taking the time to leave the review. Support from readers like you is what inspires me to try my best :3
OlwinMoriarty:Thank yu so much for the review! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story so far.It means a lot to me to get feedback from readers. It motivates me to keep improving my writing. I have a lot of ideas swirling around in my head for the next chapters. I'm very excited to keep developing this story to the end.Thanks again for taking the time to leave the review. Support from readers like you is what inspires me to try my best :3
Sabaroth_zarkiel:I have never played the game so is it necessary to have knowledge of the game before reading ?
OlwinMoriarty:Not necessary. I will give explanations about things in the game world
OlwinMoriarty:Thank yu so much for the review! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story so far.It means a lot to me to get feedback from readers. It motivates me to keep improving my writing. I have a lot of ideas swirling around in my head for the next chapters. I'm very excited to keep developing this story to the end.Thanks again for taking the time to leave the review. Support from readers like you is what inspires me to try my best :3
Harem recommendation :Yao miko, shenhe, raidon shogun, nilou, Ayaka, beidou, cadence, dehya, Eula,rosaria, ganyu,noalle, kokomi, LA yelansignora, Mona, ningguang, arlecchino.
OlwinMoriarty:No
Sabaroth_zarkiel:Harem recommendation :Yao miko, shenhe, raidon shogun, nilou, Ayaka, beidou, cadence, dehya, Eula,rosaria, ganyu,noalle, kokomi, LA yelansignora, Mona, ningguang, arlecchino.