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It's a pretty interesting story. I just want to suggest being mindful on the spacing. It's better to split up the paragraphs. It's a little heavy on the eyes to read a full-length document and other readers might feel bored on that so it's better to edit those parts and avoid it in the future chapters. Anyway, kodus!

Unlikely Lovers-( MOVED TO A NEW LINK)

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Thanks, others have mentioned it, I'll be mindful in future updates