Review Detail of BurglarOfTurds in What? SHE is My Online Girlfriend?

7 chapters in. actually read some this time, since now there is a synopsis and tags which is very nice, thank you, and my biggest complaints so far are the flow of the story can be a little stiff at times, like sometimes it feels pretty organic, but then feels sort of like it stutters? and also the characters names have been misspelled multiple times already. still though, not a bad book I could see some potential.