Review Detail of animelover1477 in The Transmigrated Author

I dropped it as of ch 8, for mc he is ehhh, he became super polite to the system, he kinda lacking right now and that could be for story development. but for the writing quality it goes back and forth between point of views its confusing. you have to read a bit of the paragraphs to understand who is talking. because author you use I from mc point of view then you use it to describe the secondary point of view and you change mid chapter. anyway the premise was coll set up, execution could be better imo, but yes creation is hard so if you maybe fix the back and forth pov maybe I could of read a little more.