As much as I love the world that the author has created I do have some issues woth the writting quality.At some point around after the main character left the mansion the quality of writting turned more or less to the quality of an mtl. I am saying this as the first few chapters were very will written in terms of quality. The author himself also stated there would be no face slapping young master moments and while it is a semi valid statement there are mentions of kowtowing aswell as a young master antagonisimg the mc.Story itself and the world building itself is fairly good. I love the mix of magic, 1600s type architecture and mixed technology from the late 1800s to early 1700s.Anyway, tl;dr all in all. Good setting, similar to LoM in some ways, system and from what I know there will be players later. Bad parts are the grammar, wording in some parts, gender getting confused and things like characters knowning about kowtowing in a medieval european type setting that isn't earth.
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giốngnone the less its something fun to read during break at work. Plus most decent works on this site are slowing down when it comes to uploads. Only true mistake on your part would be the name, it doesnt capture what the story is about. Name captures something akin to a bland harem power fantasy or some such, while your story is more in the lines of lord of mysteries in terms of story. Just thought you should know, you arent capturing your intended audience, only reason I found it was because it was in the recommended section of a chapter and I thought "why not?"
Tip_Ror:well tbh I also can't decide price of fast pass it depends on word count
Don't worry about it, its a great setting with alot of potential.Shame I cant read all of it for free but I'll try to read as much as possible by unlocking chapters using ads daily
Tip_Ror:I fixed this setting as for grammar I will recheck properly. As for writing quality it is good with chapters that's what I feels. Thanks for pointing out things
PlagueMan:Don't worry about it, its a great setting with alot of potential.Shame I cant read all of it for free but I'll try to read as much as possible by unlocking chapters using ads daily
Tip_Ror:well tbh I also can't decide price of fast pass it depends on word count