Review Detail of LtFish in Re:Life: Glitch in the System

the story is rather interesting it starts off rather slow and steady to explain the world and how the system works. it also begins the base of which the main character will grow from. building a cooperation to start a financial development plan. for example. the negative. the chapters are relatively long, and have some very slight errors. I'm not going to pick them out or dock points as obviously I do them too. and the characters see to have only a basic framework of a personality, sometimes it's their other times not so much. lastly it's locked chapters. I can't recommend it to readers who can't afford coins in moderate supply. as the average cost for chapters is around 18 coins. some are 15 at the lowest and others are up to 23. if your not aware how WN works that's the price for 2xFP to unlock, and there is about 5 chapters within the first 25 locked chapters that are " ***do not unlock*** " for one reason or another. thus it has a good start, I personality recommend a re write, to shorten chapters and post the story in a more controlled manner and more affordable to the free readers. even if that means dabbling the chapter count.