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Item: Ming Liao
Rating: 2.6

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I love the story but you don't make the plot very clear. the synopsis needs to be edited and characters more clearly described .

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Stinkypinky29

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Thank you for your advice. I have actually rewritten it according to what i had envisioned previously, do read it again and feel free to comment about any mistakes.

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