Review Detail of Allevatore_dicapre in Pokemon - A Bright Adventure

I have read till chapter 8 and I must say, for being a fanfic about pokemon, I can say for certain that this book is worth it. The style of writing is very good and grammar is correct making it easier to read. My only suggestion would be to eliminate the point at each paragraph , yet, it does not really bother the reader so it is actually ignorable