Review Detail of daoist_shaheer in Pokemon - A Bright Adventure

I read like 4 chapters and i can tell you unless the arthur does something dum in future this fanfic is awsome the grammers great(english isnt my first languge but i dont see mistake)the update stabilty cant tell (since only 4 chapter are out)but if its going to be the same pace then great. The story Development from the looks of it is more on the realistic side (my opinon is the best side of pokemon fanfics) thats all i can say for now i would add more in the future and i hope the arthur wont make this a harem like other fanfics (i hate harem and i feel like there is no need for one and makes 0 sense and ruins any romance )