Overall, a good story. I like the idea, it's unique from other pokemon fanfictions I've read in the past. It's quite early on in the story though, with the MC only being five as of Chap 40. My biggest issue is the writing style. The author writes in an overly flowery manner, and it's become quite annoying after a while, so I gave the writing quality only a 3 stars. Despite my dislike for the exaggerated writing style, there's few spelling mistakes and grammar issues that I've noticed.
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