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Review Detail of Taragorm in Wolves of Westeros

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Taragorm
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please do not take offence author writing aint easy. So ill be straight this is just listing events no dialogue no character interactions boring bland not worth reading. You have a good home of a story but aint got no furniture no fixtures no fittings barely any lights but you have good foundation for something.

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Diamond_Trooper

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Diamond_Trooper
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thxs for the creative critcism, its just my second time, so ill try my best on the next

romeotango148
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This would just be plot points that you want in your story…not a story