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Qwerttipper
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The book starts out well, but all the decisions after he is granted his wish are downright arrogant. His thoughts of preserving the Canon is stupid when he is added into the world. Anyways not the story for me hopefully mc can grow as a person and not treat everyone as pawns.

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Equuleus_Nox

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Ellenad1
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The MC does go through a character arc and starts to change his attitude

Equuleus_Nox
Equuleus_NoxTác giảEquuleus_Nox

Hey, thanks for your review! I can understand why you think that way about Ajax because I designed precisely that way. I guess that meant I did a decent job! This is his character flaw, and is something that he will need to grapple with and overcome throughout the course of the story. He will definitely see the repercussions of his actions because I will not allow him to walk away untested. Ajax preserving the canon at this point in time is a logical decision. For example, he’s not going to not have Goku face Vegeta during the Saiyan invasion since that’ll be game over. For better or for worse, the canon is shown to have worked, which is why he goes for it. So, it can be better said that he is trying to preserve the canon despite his presence, which sometimes may be more difficult than he expected. I can respect your decision though, perhaps give my story another chance when it has accumulated more chapters?😊

Juhiko
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Yeah, that is the reason I stopped reading because he treats everyone as a pawn.

oscarozo24
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Can you please clarify if the wish made Ajax immune to aging? It's never confirmed only speculated by Bulma in her angry tirade.

Equuleus_Nox:Hey, thanks for your review! I can understand why you think that way about Ajax because I designed precisely that way. I guess that meant I did a decent job! This is his character flaw, and is something that he will need to grapple with and overcome throughout the course of the story. He will definitely see the repercussions of his actions because I will not allow him to walk away untested. Ajax preserving the canon at this point in time is a logical decision. For example, he’s not going to not have Goku face Vegeta during the Saiyan invasion since that’ll be game over. For better or for worse, the canon is shown to have worked, which is why he goes for it. So, it can be better said that he is trying to preserve the canon despite his presence, which sometimes may be more difficult than he expected. I can respect your decision though, perhaps give my story another chance when it has accumulated more chapters?😊
Equuleus_Nox
Equuleus_NoxTác giảEquuleus_Nox

Yeah! So, basically Ajax’s ability will kick in for anything that’s a negative conditions applied directly to him in him. So at any point once aging becomes a negative condition, he will begin to adapt to it. He’s a child right now so aging and growth is positive. Once he hits his prime in terms of body development and age, his ability will kick in. He will still age but any and all negative conditions will be adapted to. No pains, weakened musculature, diseases, other stuffs related to old age. You can think of him freezing his age once he becomes around late twenties to early thirties.

oscarozo24:Can you please clarify if the wish made Ajax immune to aging? It's never confirmed only speculated by Bulma in her angry tirade.
DummyCake
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you'll like the recent chapters then