Review Detail of Jet_Black_Wanderer in Strongest Dad In The Apocalypse

Hey, I like your story so I'll be doing an occasional rating and review as I continue reading. Take my input as you see fit or don't I don't care. _____________________________________________ 1. The story feels repetitive, as if youre just trying to add more words for no reason. (3/5) 2. The story is developing, but you tend to drone unnecessarily on unimportant details. (3/5) 3. I love how each character is represented + the insight to the individual emotions and ideals is entertaining. (5/5) 4. Updates seem steady enough and the story is still consistent. (5/5) 5. Beautifully crafted world + enjoyable descriptions. (5/5) Overall: (4.2/5) Great Story Final Note: I intend to keep reading and look forward to seeing how this story goes.