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StarlessEclipse
StarlessEclipseLv117mth
2024-04-12 03:00

This is my first time reading a book here and leaving a review, so forgive me if it's not a crazy / explicit review made by some professional, and I'll go quickly through it explaining a few points that I really liked about the book itself along with some that let me down. 1 - The book is really easy to read, and it just flows naturally, not using much complicated phrasing or words allowing for everyone to have a good time without having to be an experienced reader, it pretty much reminds me of classical light novels, which are made to be easy to read while sharing an interesting story. 2 - Talking about the story, I have to say that while the concept itself might not seem really original, including a system, a streamer and someone playing games, I think that the author did a really good job with it and presented various original points that you might see somewhere else if you read too much, but for someone like me, it was really pleasant so far. 3 - About the characters in the novel, there isn't much that I can say about it at the moment, as I haven't reached the 200 chapter mark yet, but I can say that while there aren't many of them, you can pretty much relate to any of them on some points and have your fair share of fun reading their interactions. ( author did a good job including comedy in it ! ) 4 - The pacing of the story, I have nothing to say regarding the numbers of chapters coming out and such, since I haven't reached the last chapter that came out, once again, but instead, I'll talk about the story itself. First, the pacing is strangely accelerated, but sometimes slow, with large events happening faster than in your common novel, and I won't spoil you about it, though you'll probably understand my point after reading it yourself. About the slow part, it's just that sometimes, I feel like it was made to be slightly stretched, maybe to reach a certain number of words to publish the chapters, but honestly, not that bothering at all, just a small remark on my side, and it'll also go back to normal in the next chapter. 5 - There aren't many free chapters, maybe 36 or 38 ? I don't remember it correctly at the time of writing that review, so please excuse me. Anyways, I think it's a shame that it's the case, as I'd wish more people to delve into this story and enjoy it with me, so besides using tickets rewarded every day through daily missions or even paying for coins, there isn't a concrete solution to that problem, but at the same time, it's natural to be paid for one's work and there's nothing I can do about it as the power of communism is stronger than Breeze's will. More seriously, I already spent a bit more than 20€ in that story and I have to say that it was well spent for the content I got out of it, might not please everyone, but it was to my taste so please accept my support ! Overall : It's a really good story that I immediately got into, would definitely recommend it to any kind of reader, experienced or not. The contents vary from comedy to action, without forgetting about discovery/adventure and even a tinge of romance, which should satisfy the tastes of everyone I believe. ( I'm not everyone and it's just my personal opinion though. ) And if you're still unsure about it, just give it a try, I can't promise anything, but I'm almost sure you won't regret it !

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PurpleEnigmas
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OK, so I don’t do reviews like ever, but this WebNovel needs to be recognized. 1) Imma start with the characters. Every character is very fun and relatable. we all have that “ one friend” who you can see in the characters. The interactions are also very fluid and organic, I wouldn’t be surprised if these convos happened in the real world. 2) Onto the world. so it is set in a futuristic world where earth has advanced like crazy. I won’t spoil too much and let you experience the vibe yourself. 3) OK a big one and might be a turn off for some, The system. To be honest, I don’t mind systems and even ones that add “ punishments”, but like the author has mentioned before the system is more of like a little bonus gift every now and then. Legit remove the system, and the MC is still a gamer who would accomplish his dreams with or without the system the system just speeds up the process. 4) Last but not least romance. OK, so here I am kind of torn the author has said only one girl will be with the MC in the end… and it’s tough cause I really like both love interests I am currently leaning more for Lily but Nina is just to precious as long as she’s happy I’m happy just don’t want a broken heart :( Anyways, I should wrap this up. It’s starting to look like an essay XD. Just give the book a shot if you enjoy content creators at all that streamers or Youtubers, I promise you will like this. My only gripe is there are two little chapters right now, in under one and a half days, I read through all of the privileged chapters up the max teir :/ keep up the awesome work author, here’s to many more chapters to go!

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