Review Detail of Daoist4MxvaV in Cynic’s Second Wind: DxD Chronicles - English version

The story is ok , my only problem it doesn't flow as much as u what it to when I read a novel I like image I am watching the novel as a film , I imagine the interactions ,emotions , dialogue and action of the characters. Sorry but some the dialogue especially the emotional scenes , when it plays in my head it sounds a little cringe, sorry again, the story , writing etc is top tier but dialogue sounds weird to me