Review Detail of CoolDreamBoy in Living Ghost

Hi everyone, author here. Really shameless of me to review my own book right? But hey, I'm also a reader. My personal ratings are based on how I perceive the readability and relatability of my work. So, for me, I still have a lot to improve. Agree or disagree? let me know what you guys think.I will drop more notes like this in the future as the story progresses. For now, just read, vote, comment and enjoy!