Review Detail of Harem_God_Zero in In one piece with the Hito Hito no mi model: super potential

I hope you enjoy I take a critique but if it's not about my writing please don't write a review just move on don't just put one star because it's a harem, and if you don't like something about the story don't expect me to change it I come on here to write and have fun I don't get paid... And it's my story so I can write what I want, not trying to be rude but just trying to get my point across