ok, i like th MC, and her enviroment, i liked so much the plot. Writing style it's ok, maybe some great praragraf that give me some slow motios vibes when i0m reading it, but it's a nice style. Only thing, give us some hook or some clues, a litle bite lost on where is ti going
NellaFern
Liked it!
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