An interesting concept, I went into this story thinking it would be poorly done, but I actually see decent grammar, and backstory written inside of it. As I am a fan of Elliot Jackson's other stories, I say give this one a chance. I have a quick question though, Is the ancient one going to be his girl, or is there going to be a breakup or something? The rest of the story is good, it's just the ancient one that I have a slight dislike to the mc's love interest,
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