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A highly enjoyable story to read, where the narrative stands out for its meticulous attention to detail in describing scenes and actions. Everything suggests that this work holds immense potential, a spark that will undoubtedly soon transform into a burning and brilliant flame!

Wandering Knight Too Angry to Die

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I revamped the first chapter based on your suggestion. The next chapters will follow soon.

CosmicArchmage
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I gave it a quick look, and you've certainly improved the dialogues and organized the paragraph lengths better. Good job, it looks quite nice!

Clocktower_Lucil:I revamped the first chapter based on your suggestion. The next chapters will follow soon.