Review Detail of MansonFD7 in title removed

With several advices I've given to you on each paragraph comments', I'd hope you'll understand from what I've said to you. I'd have a good faith this novel will be in the front page of this book. But still, I'd like you to fix the synopsis to make it more sense with the story, and also change your title to be more brief and give it an oomph to make the reader felt more engaged with your book. Maybe titled it like "Mystery Of Aboron"/"Blackened Days"/"Tormented Souls"/"Love To Suffer"/something that's somehow hyperbolic. Hope this'll help.