Worst fanfic I’ve ever read 😂 At most, maybe one thing each chapter is logical; everything else doesn’t make a single bit of sense. Also, having your MC who was previously an old man with a lot of life experience call someone mommy as soon as he’s born is actually so gross and unreadable. And last but not least, it felt like I was reading MTL on crack with your horrible grammar. If you’re native to English, please get a tutor or go to the hospital and get a test or something done for autism, but if you’re a foreigner, just stick to your own language if you’re the type to settle for this monstrosity of an English form.
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So this is what a troll is like huh?🤔 My first time experiencing it but somehow it really motivates me to write more and more chapters🤩 There are already 64 as of now adding this to their library and I'm happy at that thought unlike you who seemed to have raging hormones and tried to read a bit and leave, the backstory for my MC is a trope and it shows how he has progress with his life that would help him understand the perspective of being a gang leader and a cop also a politician.🤔 So idk why you would judge my english too when it is my 3rd language and also writing for me is a learning experience and now that you've told me this, I feel even motivated to write more chapters🤩 Also, your english sucks too.
I wrote multiple paragraphs telling you exactly why your novel isn’t good. That’s not trolling, idiot. Wow, 64 whole readers. That makes a new record! And when someone who can barely finish a sentence tells me that my grammar sucks, do you genuinely think it even remotely makes me think that my English actually sucks?
Dumb_Racoon:So this is what a troll is like huh?🤔 My first time experiencing it but somehow it really motivates me to write more and more chapters🤩 There are already 64 as of now adding this to their library and I'm happy at that thought unlike you who seemed to have raging hormones and tried to read a bit and leave, the backstory for my MC is a trope and it shows how he has progress with his life that would help him understand the perspective of being a gang leader and a cop also a politician.🤔 So idk why you would judge my english too when it is my 3rd language and also writing for me is a learning experience and now that you've told me this, I feel even motivated to write more chapters🤩 Also, your english sucks too.
Oh and yeah I edited my story now! But I guess you won't be reading it now still I am happy to have you as my first reviewer, even though you are a bit rash to someone who wrote his first fanfic. Any newbies would already be dismayed by this sort of treatment yet I'm different so I'mma write 2 chapters on this day. The first 5 chapters was supposed to be my rough draft which I impulsively published. I hope you understand that if you actually ever cared. The reason I called you a troll is that in every review you made it seemed to offend and disrupt me from writing my novel when I am in a state of letting my ideas flow, revisions can be made later.
Stop letting your ideas flow.
Dumb_Racoon:Oh and yeah I edited my story now! But I guess you won't be reading it now still I am happy to have you as my first reviewer, even though you are a bit rash to someone who wrote his first fanfic. Any newbies would already be dismayed by this sort of treatment yet I'm different so I'mma write 2 chapters on this day. The first 5 chapters was supposed to be my rough draft which I impulsively published. I hope you understand that if you actually ever cared. The reason I called you a troll is that in every review you made it seemed to offend and disrupt me from writing my novel when I am in a state of letting my ideas flow, revisions can be made later.
I see, a troll indeed. I already stalked your account and I've seen what type of novels you've read. I would have said, you have fine taste if I am a degenerate like you, but I'm not a degenerate you see...So I can gladly say you are one of many scums on this earth. Be proud of that.
Kw0z:Stop letting your ideas flow.
Let’s not forget that this novel showed up on my recommended page. If I’m a degenerate, you’re a producer of degeneracy.
You're still here? You really love me huh, I'm flattered.🤭
Kw0z:Let’s not forget that this novel showed up on my recommended page. If I’m a degenerate, you’re a producer of degeneracy.
This comment was made right after you replied to me. At least pay attention to when comments are made, idiot.
Dumb_Racoon:You're still here? You really love me huh, I'm flattered.🤭
I see, Webnovel is a bit buggy and I don't know when I get notification even when I already check it 10 times. Only after a few hours do I get the notifs or when I'm looking exactly at the time you commented. Anyways how are you?🤔
Kw0z:This comment was made right after you replied to me. At least pay attention to when comments are made, idiot.
bro got no enemies
Dumb_Racoon:I see, Webnovel is a bit buggy and I don't know when I get notification even when I already check it 10 times. Only after a few hours do I get the notifs or when I'm looking exactly at the time you commented. Anyways how are you?🤔
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Consera:bro got no enemies
