Review Detail of AvalonKing in Kyouhana: The Dark Lord's Bride Offering

This is an early review of this book so be aware that my thoughts may change as we get further along. This is an enjoyable book with an interesting premise and I especially like the 1st person POV which you don’t see a lot of on Webnovel. While it’s an easy read, there are some points that were a bit confusing in terms of dialogue or just broke immersion if that makes sense. For example, towards the end of chapter 4 when FL gets past the guards and is holding a conversation - there are barely any markers to show who is speaking. At first, it was very confusing because I did not know another character was with her and then I got lost in their back and forth. This is just something to watch out for because other than that, there are very few grammatical errors and it’s such an easy, straight-to-the-point read. Keep it up, Author!