Review Detail of ZynauxX_ in [DROPPED] Re:Zero/Mordred Pendragon. King of Lugnica (fanfiction)

There are some positive and negative points in this fic: Positive: there are few good fics and even fewer that are well written, so it's been good to follow along, I'm also enjoying the writing and this mix between two worlds. Negative: Well... the mc of this fic is a subaru 2 slowly becoming Emilia's puppy, making her world revolve around Emilia, the only difference is individual strength, why is that? no creativity? there are many good things that could be the focus of the main plot, but again it all comes down to a naive and incompetent half-elf, because the MC is one of the real candidates I thought there would be a political plot with development of secondary characters, but again... .emilia this emilia that. DISAPPOINTING