Review Detail of Honoured_Writer in [DROPPED] Re:Zero/Mordred Pendragon. King of Lugnica (fanfiction)

I‘m going to be honest this fanfic isn’t really exciting in the slightest bit but can be accounted to the fact that it’s still in its early so here are the it certain aspects of the story is does well in 1 Character Iteraction. The iteractions feel nice and genuine and not weird entirely though there are still awkward parts here and there. Comedy is great whenever Subaru is around so thatts a plus 2 This fic stays true to the original personalities of the cast members 3 Fight scenes described are near perfect though still lacking is to be expected And that’s pretty much where it ends for me now let’s list the negatives imo 1 One point I’ve seen in the reviews that I though was true was the fact that this story lacks meaning due to the fact it feels like it’s trying to replace Subaru with some added parts like Knight addition to the royal selection which I thought was ok but would’ve preferred if it wasn’t added and he just joined another camp though it ties in well wuth Mordreds backstory 2 The random affection Mc seems to just have obtained for Emilia in latest chapter 3 Subaru even being apart of the story like if Satella doesn’t love him whg was he even here. It just feels like a forced way to add him in for future purposes I’m ranting a bunch so I’m just gonna move away from negatives and add something else I wouldve preferred which is Subaru also gaining RbD and having their abibilities synced so they both return at the same time but that’s just me All in all it’s good but a feel things changed would be good