first of all horrible writing When he spells awesome as owesome , titles as tittles and suprise as suprias basically a lot of typos, wrong words and missing words the fact that he has been writing this for nearly a month and there's no signs of improvement its not good the mc is the 7th place on the test why would the clan just allow him to leave when he is an asset like bruh he got abducted by the clan then they just let him leave when he has talent come on man atleast make it reasonable and another thing the demon body is getting sidelined sure using the human body is good and all but you havent even develop the main body properly like he just awakened his bloodline thsn abandoned it focusing on the human
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giốngthat's very much needed I've been having strokes reading this im still reading only because I'm interested in the concept and I have nothing to read right noe
yashwanth_G:yes, the concept of the story was very good and has potential. but it was planned very poorly, maybe an appropriate re-write do the magic