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Fisherman_Dream
Fisherman_DreamLv21yr
2023-08-16 19:25

Cool, I loved the novel, I'll let the chapters accumulate, author, can you put game techniques for Bell to be able to imitate and be able to do fighting techniques? As with the God of War, the Blades of Chaos is technically a set of daggers that even Bell uses, so it can even be wielded by Bell himself.

Danmachi The reincarnation of the menace

zack_364
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Fisherman_Dream
Fisherman_DreamLv2

Or you can put the skills of Draven, a character from LOL, it would be cool to see Bell killing with pure daggers.

1yr
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zack_364
zack_364Tác giả

I will try to use game techniques but only ones that are actually useful for the mc, as I see no point in getting one and just using it a couple of times and never hearing of it again. As for the Blades of Chaos, I wanted to use them as well but the size of them leaves me puzzled you know if you hand it to child Bell it's going to appear as a bulky sword, not a dagger, his build is small even as a teen so it leaves me conflicted to use, I have other ideas in mind but if they won't work I will go with the Blades of Chaos as A fan of God of War I love them as well. Thank you for the suggestion (●'◡'●)

1yr
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holy_anonymous2
holy_anonymous2Lv4

to be honest, for chapter 1-15 its really awesome and i read it many time but until author decide want to reincarnated all character that died because of his friend fault . it’s became annoying and dont suit my taste, sorry about this but this story its really really awesome and unique until you want reincarnated them . i dont know about anyone else but yeah sorry i‘m drop it even though i’m always give you power stone hahaha but nahh, goodluck man !! i know, not everyone like me , i think more than 95% love about your decision to reincarnated character like tang san , etc.But i just dont like it ( and maybe because i dont like tang san ?? hahaha just prejudiced ) so yeah, goodluckk my friend !!! this story have a amazing and unique taste , its just dont suit my taste , that’s all hahahaha so yeah , thanks for the chapter 👍🏻

1yr

senpai_shin
senpai_shinLv4

i enjoy reading this fanfic author sheshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

1yr
JSBtheFenrir
JSBtheFenrirLv4

The story is good in overall, of course there's still room for improvement in the pace and writing quality but this a just a minor issue. It may not fit for all the taste but I like it very much and the characters are "alive" not like in other fanfictions (mostly mtl). So a great story with potential, recommend to give it a try. And great job to the "One Who Write"

1yr
aramirez0008
aramirez0008Lv5

I like that you have dragon slayer magic but come on just buy props to save Bell aunt. As well as the other power system is not compatible with danmachi since it makes it to complicated. Focus on one power system and if you want to add those Chinese power system make with attack direction or you can use moon world Odin ruins. Well with Chinese you have to simply it since it is to complicated and annoying.

1yr
RaikerOkamura
RaikerOkamuraLv4

that is not harem,that is not harem,that is not harem,that is not harem,that is not harem,that is not harem,that is not harem,that is not harem,

1yr
AlexPendragon
AlexPendragonLv1

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Daoist550723
Daoist550723Lv14

Honestly I just love the chaos Bell is causing to the world. It makes him a menace to society that I just love. But the most I'm looking forward to is the change in history (plot) he is going to make.

1yr
Souls_Altar
Souls_AltarLv4

All I can say is it's great work even if there are mistakes.keep up the great work 👍👍.

1yr
shahad_khan
shahad_khanLv1

I love your story. desperately waiting for updates. hope you cal upload soon.I wanted to know do you plan to make it a harem story? if so then who will you add?

1yr
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