First of all the review will be a bit low due to the story being new and fresh.The writing quality is good tho it can still improve which is a good sign, and the story development can still be adjusted as it's moderate in my opinion but this is normal and you don't need to change that really much, go at your own pace. I'll be rating the character design as 1 start cause there's practically nothing(correct me if im wrong) but the stability is the good thing about this i think? 2 stars for the world background because you haven't expanded on it yet. Overall the storys's potential is 8/10 for me can the low aspects can be improved further as the story continue to develop.
Aurora_Drakon
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giốngAurora_Drakon:Thank you very much for your helpful review. It provides valuable insights, and I will certainly make an effort to address the points you've mentioned. Once again, I appreciate your input.