as a fellow writer I hope my review helps a bit but one hint if you use ai for your writing what is absolutely a god thing don't get me wrong try to smoothen the section especially on the first chapter to the second chapter where the mc at the end of chapter one continues on the search for food but in the second chapter he or she is still there and will eat it otherwise I like the story is a bit of a different approach towards systems
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