Review Detail of Deathwatch99999 in Unlock Early Access to Pokémon Game

Interesting idea. However, I can't get past the first 10 chapters really drawn-out, and a few chapters were literally just repeating the same paragraph over and over in slightly different ways. The other factor is that I don't know if this story was translated over, but parts of the story don't make sense, such as what the heck the first Pokémon he has is. I just can't in any way continue to read this.