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First book I've translated and I've tried to make it more understandable without completely changing the meaning so give it a try and see it you like the story

Konoha Tavern: Opening Call Uchiha Madara

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Reiya9
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Did you even proof read it? The synopsis is already wrong saying the world of hokage instead of Naruto smh. Hokage is a title not the world

shin_rae_miu
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sad you are not the actual author,if only you were the actual author I would have requested a small stage in the tavern with a metal pole at the center of the stage and have madara dance on it since he just loved to 'dance' way to much.

bearburrable
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Why did it have to be a Harem though? Ugh... so many of that stuff in here already