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Lythan_PageTác giả1yrLythan_Page

well, because i am the author ...........................................................................................................................

DC: with D&D Artificer

Lythan_Page

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_BruhLv12_Bruh

Your synopsis having poor grammar is not a good look.

11mth

Lythan_PageTác giảLythan_Page

there, I tried to fix any grammatical error but English is my second language

_Bruh:Your synopsis having poor grammar is not a good look.

11mth

_BruhLv12_Bruh

English is my third language lol Just use Grammarly. It's free and helps a lot.

Lythan_Page:there, I tried to fix any grammatical error but English is my second language

11mth

READ_STAT_MAXLv15READ_STAT_MAX

I bet bro works for grammarly

_Bruh:English is my third language lol Just use Grammarly. It's free and helps a lot.

11mth

gamabunda4873Lv5gamabunda4873

your tags and description say different things will there be romance or not

9mth

Lythan_PageTác giảLythan_Page

yes, no herem

gamabunda4873:your tags and description say different things will there be romance or not
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9mth

gamabunda4873Lv5gamabunda4873

hint for love interest??

Lythan_Page:yes, no herem

9mth

Lythan_PageTác giảLythan_Page

killer frost but I am debating thea queen

gamabunda4873:hint for love interest??

9mth

gamabunda4873Lv5gamabunda4873

sweet i guess i am in for the full ride now doesn't really matter, but I vote for thea

Lythan_Page:killer frost but I am debating thea queen

9mth

Orion_RidgeLv1Orion_Ridge

So, has it been decided now? If yes, then who is it?

Lythan_Page:killer frost but I am debating thea queen

7mth

Lythan_PageTác giảLythan_Page

thea, aparanly killer frost has been over done

Orion_Ridge:So, has it been decided now? If yes, then who is it?

7mth

Azathoth2Lv4Azathoth2

why thea?

gamabunda4873:sweet i guess i am in for the full ride now doesn't really matter, but I vote for thea
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Kamikaze_EagleLv4Kamikaze_Eagle

Have you considered going back and editing your previous chapters? From what I've seen your later chapters are supposed to be better than your earlier ones as you gained writing experience, but your initial chapters are still kinda iffy.

Lythan_Page:there, I tried to fix any grammatical error but English is my second language

6mth

Lythan_PageTác giảLythan_Page

yap, already working on it, and I am even reworking the whole system

Kamikaze_Eagle:Have you considered going back and editing your previous chapters? From what I've seen your later chapters are supposed to be better than your earlier ones as you gained writing experience, but your initial chapters are still kinda iffy.

6mth