Review Detail of Daoist_Dan in Into the wizarding world as Neville Longbottom

Don't write situations where comedy will always be overshadowed by the realism a moment calls for. Kicked out a window? Anger. Resentment. Relationship changed. Railroaded into the wrong wand? Unwillingness and focus on trying to solve their problem. These are things to be expected. Humor doesn't solve these problems. Total 2.6 Writing Quality 3 Stability of Updates 4 Story Development 1 Character Design 1 World Background 4