I thought it was a great story, it has a lot of potential and I see a promising future for Jon, it would be cool if he imitated Daemon and became the King of Steps. The biggest flaw in this story is the slow updates, sometimes the author doesn't post anything for a month and when he does post it's just one chapter and I don't know the others, but I keep wanting more! Highly frustrating!
TheManUnderTheBed
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giốngTheManUnderTheBed:I am currently writing 10 stories at once while working full time. Which to be fair is my own fault 🤣 but I can’t help it when I get an idea for a story. Anyway I’ll try and update more often when I can create a decent backlog. Glad you enjoyed it.