Review Detail of Shaine_chan in parelel world traveler

First and foremost, I like the idea set in the story. It is intriguing but the writing quality could be better. The author needs to work on the proper use of punctuation and consistency in POV. BUt then again, it's too early to leave a review for the character design, stability of updates and story development. One thing is for sure, this story has great potential. Job well done Author!