Good story so far , minor mistakes made in sentinces here and there but overall I enjoy how fluid it is , some places in my opinion has a bit too much detail that could be shortened but its also good to tell detail about thing , might just be myself that sometimes feel too much detail afect how I read , and then skip some context or paragraphs 😅 but I do enjoy the read so far. I hope to see more conversations with characters aswell. keep ir up
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