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Reborn_Killer
Reborn_KillerLv31yrReborn_Killer

All I want to is this novel ain’t for me. But since this is a review I will list problems that this novel have or problems that I think are problems. 1. Constantly switching POV’s. The author has a thing for constantly switching POV’s multiple times in every chapter single chapter all up to chapter 21 Aka chapter 19 named Miracle. Above that I have no clue. 2. Certain words just don’t fit. Let’s say the word Lussum which is a Latin word for Order(i research the word and I didn’t where it said it is a Latin word for Order so I wonder where the author found the meaning of the word being Order) it is one thing to use words of different language by themselfs but using them in way you could say words that could have made sense if the right words were used but certain words just can’t be said together. For example Chaos and Lussum. You know what Lussum means but saying the words just don’t fit especially when a better substitute exists. For example saying Chaos and Order is better and more preferable by many and easier to understand. The words the author used are better off used as Names which he/she did. But when it comes to being used in a sentence that is not mentioning a person, entity’s name it just don’t sound right. 3. Does the the words Secret and Caution not exist? Mc reveal everything about himself to random whom he call grandpa who he only knew about 2 years or less. When I said he revealed everything about himself I mean literally. From his past life name, age, technique and cause of death to everything about himself in the present life. HE revealed everything like an open book.

Remake name-Chaos Chronicles: Rise of the Cosmic Archon[Remastered]

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Realm_Weaver
Realm_WeaverTác giảRealm_Weaver

Thanks for reading this book but I've stopped updating it and I'm making rewriting it because it was...let's just say bad. Too many info dumps and not enough plot. The remake is available on Webnovel under the name, Chaos Chronicles: Rise of the Cosmic Archon[Remastered]. You can put it in your library but it will be a while before I update it. In the meantime, you can check my new novel, Genesis Chronicles: A Tamer's Ascendence. I would really appreciate some feedback on it.[img=recommend]

Lucinda_Hacker:lol
Realm_Weaver
Realm_WeaverTác giảRealm_Weaver

it's iussum not lussum but thank you for the review. As for why the mc told his secrets, another reader also asked the same question in chapter comments. I have already answered so you can check it out. Thank you for the feedback.

Lucinda_Hacker
Lucinda_HackerLv4Lucinda_Hacker

Dude! If you're gonna comment about someone's mistakes watch your spelling and grammar first!

Lucinda_Hacker
Lucinda_HackerLv4Lucinda_Hacker

lol

Realm_Weaver:it's iussum not lussum but thank you for the review. As for why the mc told his secrets, another reader also asked the same question in chapter comments. I have already answered so you can check it out. Thank you for the feedback.
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Lucinda_Hacker
Lucinda_HackerLv4Lucinda_Hacker

Yeah I see what you mean after reading the first chap! Your paragraph spacing is terrible and some spelling and grammar issues.

Realm_Weaver:Thanks for reading this book but I've stopped updating it and I'm making rewriting it because it was...let's just say bad. Too many info dumps and not enough plot. The remake is available on Webnovel under the name, Chaos Chronicles: Rise of the Cosmic Archon[Remastered]. You can put it in your library but it will be a while before I update it. In the meantime, you can check my new novel, Genesis Chronicles: A Tamer's Ascendence. I would really appreciate some feedback on it.[img=recommend]