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Item: OGI: The Hunt for Level Three
Rating: 3.6

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SYED_ASADLv21yrSYED_ASAD

I think that the prologue part is totally not needed right now. The way I see it, it can be very eye opening if the prologue part can be used further in the story. otherwise, it's a good book. But I strongly insist that you improve on vocabulary expressions and make the scenes the characters more descriptive.

OGI: The Hunt for Level Three

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THE_GOAT_HIMSELFTác giảTHE_GOAT_HIMSELF

I put the prologue there for a reason that will be more understandable later in the story and also I feel the prologue is my hook the prologue was originally fused with my 2nd chapter but I realized it would be more smooth as a prologue but thank you for your review

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THE_GOAT_HIMSELFTác giảTHE_GOAT_HIMSELF

and for that last one thanks I realized that and I'm working on it

1yr