Looks like I found another diamond in the rough. The grammar felt like the waves of the sea going up and down, sometimes so good, sometimes hard to understand. A bit of Grammarly should do the trick. Still, you got me hooked with your story. Despite the overall depressing tone of the first few chapters, I found myself wanting to read more. I guess it was because of the great storytelling? Overall, a good read. Definitely something to recommend to others (especially after fixing the grammar). Cheers!
Patricia_Ntsama
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