Review Detail of Redfang1990 in Fairy Tail: Magical Life

23 chapter's in and I think this has great potential for a great fanfic. But i do think if you have the time you should come back to the first 6 chapters and edit them so they explain mc action better. p.s i don't like the fact that people are giving 2 star reviews because the mc uses alchemy or Truth had an appearance in the story. Because i think that these complaints aren't valid criticism there more of opinions then anything.