I'm not gonna lie this is good. Grammar is ok, words run together but otherwise good. Still a bit early for update stability. Not much is know bout the world background since it's not really during the 'Star Wars Era's' we know, it's practically an OG story. Character design is alright so far. I'm liking story development, all we need now is a status chapter for the mc along with a reference pic of his armor, weapons, looks, etc. Now I am hesitant however, I can sense tragedy on the horizon and i realllly don't like tragedy. I'm traumatized by tragedy so I don't know if I should continue or not.
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