Review Detail of Augustdsuza in Deleted 1993

An amazingly well-written story with a non-cliche plot and a refreshing take on normalized fantasy novels. Personally, I liked how determined the main character is. He knows what he wants to do and achieves it perfectly. The only thing that I felt could need improvement is the description. Although it fits perfectly, it feels a bit lengthy. Otherwise, fabulous job by the author. Keep it up!!!