Review Detail of DaoistkX7 in The Return Of The Dark Lord

Hello author here! The things that I'll write here and on the auxiliary chapter isn't much different but I'll write it anyway. ( I need an excuse to rate this book five stars) I am new to writing, and I strive to be better, so constructive criticism and suggestions about what I should improve about is absolutely welcomed! of course I also strive to be better too but things that I see that I should improve and things that you guys see that needs improvement can be different so that's why your feedback is necessary. that is all thank you and enjoy!