Review Detail of Eyyy_yy in Fractured Realities: Collection of Stories of the Mad Events

This is a story written by a friend of mine and I absolutely enjoyed reading this despite it is only the first chapter. Jonathan has a meaningful character design compared to other protagonists I know. I love reading stories that uses literary devices because it makes the story livelier and fun to read as opposed to stories that uses plain words, making it boring to read. I will be looking forward to more chapters in the future and congrats on publishing your webnovel! - Ey💃