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Item: Apex Star
Rating: 4.8

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jmjackieLv31yrjmjackie

Nice try! But still needs some work... The story of Nova is captivating and filled with suspenseful twists and turns. However, the author's lack of attention to spelling and grammar detracts from the overall experience. Encouraging the author to review and edit their chapters before posting will enhance the quality of the story and make it more enjoyable for readers. A little extra effort in editing can go a long way in creating a polished and professional final product :)

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Zefyr

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ZefyrTác giảZefyr

That's what I thought, too. For now, i'm writing some drafts and will post after a few days when i'm sure it'll make a difference.

1yr

RainbowBeheaderLv13RainbowBeheader

romance? if so, mc ends up with 1 or more girls?

Zefyr:That's what I thought, too. For now, i'm writing some drafts and will post after a few days when i'm sure it'll make a difference.

1yr

ZefyrTác giảZefyr

I don't really want a harem. Most probably i'll focus on a single one.

RainbowBeheader:romance? if so, mc ends up with 1 or more girls?

1yr

RainbowBeheaderLv13RainbowBeheader

i do not read harem so when u decide for sure what do u want, can u answer me?

Zefyr:I don't really want a harem. Most probably i'll focus on a single one.

1yr

ZefyrTác giảZefyr

I said i don't like a harem. That's why im going to focus on a single female companion. :)

RainbowBeheader:i do not read harem so when u decide for sure what do u want, can u answer me?

1yr

ZefyrTác giảZefyr

I think i already said i dont want a harem. Still just to make sure xD

RainbowBeheader:i do not read harem so when u decide for sure what do u want, can u answer me?

1yr