Overall a really good fanfic ,well written a bit cringe /silly but not unbearable, that even add a good mood while reading. I think you should not hesitate to expand the harem (not disproportionate and not pokeharem). But with the pace of the story there is no problem. Please don't set yourself a limit especially if there will be another universe after it. (yeah I have a preference for big harem:) everything is in the pace also I love the pov chapter. The only default is the gap in the last updates. A bit scared that it will slowly be longer and longer. Thanks to the author, just don't forget that there will always be people who trash talk /dislike your choice but ultimately it's your stories. Good luck with the following.
The_POZ
Liked it!
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