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Spic1503
Spic1503Lv1529dSpic1503

Title of the book can be misleading. MC isnt building an Empire, he is barely building a city. The city is being build in the background without us knowing which I find terrible. Where the city building chapters or empire building??? Why the hell would he chill in other cities except the one hes building. It had a great start but everything went downhill when you stop focusing on character development and empire building development. I think the title is clickbait and false. Get back to empire/city building and focusing on leveing his city to see his GF from the start again

Building your own super empire from scratch

DaoistpjUWEL

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Thank you for your candid feedback; indeed, that is the case. However, I would like to clarify the reason. When this novel was first created, some readers provided feedback that they did not like seeing a weak MC; they wanted to see a strong MC fighting enemies. Therefore, I shifted the focus of my writing. Now, at 300 chapters, it is difficult for me to redirect the focus back to empire building. But I assure you, in the upcoming chapters, I will make sure that Laura returns. Since Laura's combat power is at T0, I will reintroduce her in a different way.

Spic1503
Spic1503Lv15Spic1503

I understand, i guess i’m just disappointed since I was expecting a kingdom building/city building genre with the title. Since it only an OP caracter fighting non stop everywhere and he abandoned his city I wont be spending coins anymore since its not my style. i would just like to give my opinion. Since this is your novel, stick to your plan and whay you want to create, doesnt mean thay someone didnt like it that someone else wont. Just like what your original readers didnt like, i liked. What I like, they dislike. I found the first 75 chapters to be the best and wished you would of stayed the same 🥲

DaoistpjUWEL:Thank you for your candid feedback; indeed, that is the case. However, I would like to clarify the reason. When this novel was first created, some readers provided feedback that they did not like seeing a weak MC; they wanted to see a strong MC fighting enemies. Therefore, I shifted the focus of my writing. Now, at 300 chapters, it is difficult for me to redirect the focus back to empire building. But I assure you, in the upcoming chapters, I will make sure that Laura returns. Since Laura's combat power is at T0, I will reintroduce her in a different way.
Ahupnatun
AhupnatunLv13Ahupnatun

That really saddens me the people clamoring for over powered mc's from the beginning. It's fine from time to time, but I feel like it cheapens the character so much. It also tends to make any side character in the story be completely obsolete. I want to see the mc struggle a lot and barely make it through challenges to get his powerups. Not just a random roll of good luck and get all SSS grade talents or skills in the first 5 chapters.

DaoistpjUWEL:Thank you for your candid feedback; indeed, that is the case. However, I would like to clarify the reason. When this novel was first created, some readers provided feedback that they did not like seeing a weak MC; they wanted to see a strong MC fighting enemies. Therefore, I shifted the focus of my writing. Now, at 300 chapters, it is difficult for me to redirect the focus back to empire building. But I assure you, in the upcoming chapters, I will make sure that Laura returns. Since Laura's combat power is at T0, I will reintroduce her in a different way.