The writing is above average. The grammar is fine but the character itself is too mixed of a personality. Sometimes he acts smart sometimes Impulsive and reckless to absolutely cringe. Interactions seem a bit forced but that is because it seems incomplete. Like you wanted to start but got trailed off. The update stability is fine. The world background is also nicely done. Hope you continue writing. Fic is good.
Yasui
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