Review Detail of vorlefan in The Perfect Planner.(GOD)

This is a heavy story that treats an important topic in our society. And the perspective we get is a good one to enlighten the problem. To improve: Grammar: It has some issues that break the flow of the reader. Be it in the structure, or grammatical points to review. In this case, I recommend you use Grammarly and Wordtune for future rewriting. Depth: For a heavy topic, it lacks a bit of metaphor and inner work in the thoughts and little actions of each character for a higher connection with the reader. For that, I would suggest you watch the tv show: 'Lovecraft Country'. All in all, keep up the good work!